UCI Water Crisis in Gaza Palestine Policy Options Discussion Response

Policy Options Peer Review

For your peer review, please answer these questions about your peer’s writing. If the answer to the

question is unclear, then please give your peer some concrete feedback about what is unclear in his/ her

writing. In addition to answering these questions, please also make some in-text comments about your

peer’s writing. Offer comments about paragraph and sentence structure, the flow of ideas, word choice,

etc. Let your peer know if you are having trouble following his/her ideas, and (to the extent possible)

offer suggestions for improvement.

Please keep in mind that you will be submitting both this document AND your in-text comments to two

assignment folders on Canvas—1) Policy Options Peer Feedback, and 2) Policy Options—FOR PEER

REVIEW. Therefore, you are submitting two documents to two places on Canvas. It is necessary for you

submit your two files to these two Canvas assignment folders so that you can receive a grade for your

peer review and so that your peer can see your comments.

Policy Option 1: Does the policy option target the problem? Are the positives and negatives clearly

outlined?

Policy Option 2: Does the policy option target the problem? Are the positives and negatives clearly

outlined?

Policy Option 3 (optional): Does the policy option target the problem? Are the positives and negatives

clearly outlined?

Is it clear which policy option the writer prefers and why? What is the criteria that the writer uses to

base her/his evaluation of which policy is most effective (eg, cost, time saving, etc.)?

Describe one or two of the writer’s strengths with regards to writing style. Be sure to point to the

strength(s) in the text while making your comments.

Describe one or two of the writer’s weaknesses with regards to writing style. Be sure to point to the

weakness(es) in the text while making your comments.